The link to the document

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNdAQYnzdSPYbPon44-JZUZLmAlQTIwP4Z0u7TUlxEg/edit?usp=sharing

The link to wikia

This is my link to wikia and the topic is learning a foreign language.
http://trinity-ise-1-vocabularhttp://trinity-ise-1-vocabulary.wikia.com/wiki/Learning_a_Foreign_Languagey.wikia.com/wiki/Learning_a_Foreign_Language

My common grammar mistakes

                                                             My Common Grammar Mistakes

Ignacio Herrera M.                             22 of August, 2013                        8th grade ise-1
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Mistake Number 1:
You were played a game
You were playing a game

The grammar rule: The past continuous is formed from the past tense of be with the -ing form of the verb:

The explanation of the grammar rule: the link is of the page of the explanation is, http://esl.fis.edu/grammar/rules/pastcont.htm:

• At this time last week I was lying on the beach in Florida.
• My mother was working in the garden so she didn't hear the telephone when I called her yesterday.
• I had my car fixed because it wasn't working properly.
• Sorry, I wasn't listening. Can you say it again please?
• What were you doing at 8 o'clock yesterday?

Two new examples:

I was playing football with my friends.

I was doing a test

Here are two links with examples of the past continuous:

http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/past-progressive/exercises

http://autoenglish.org/gr.pascon.i.htm

Mistake 2:I was jumped with my friends yesterday.

Mistake 3:I was do a joke to my friend.

Mistake 4:They were played with they friends.

Mistake 5:She was talked with her friends.

section2,task5

Yesterday, I saw a soccer match, but this match was not a normal match and i'm angry with the referee and the player of U. de Chile. In the final of the match they was in tie and the player of Colo-colo had the ball, he was going to throw the ball when the player of U. de Chile made a foult to him, and then finish the match and the referee said, that he didn't see the foult and this answer made me more angry.
I have a solution for this problem. We can talk with FIFA that they can put two referees more in the lines.

section2,task4

How to Plan a Perfect Party:
I have some ideas for the perfect party, the first idea is to put the people in plataforms in the air of the place and the dj will be in the center of the party. The third idea is that the place will be a jungle and the mans will be a tiger and the womens will be catch and then the tigers will dance with the womans. Some parties are not succesful because the peolpe are boried of the classic party that they only dance but if you do something like this ideas that I give you, you will have succesful because the people want to be in a different party.

section2,task3

Fashion show:
yesterday I went to the fashion show at the auditorium and I saw some some students that where wearing some unusual clothes and all tipes of colors. Some designes were a military shoes and a yellow jeans, the shirt were breaked and pink. The desing I liked more were a sports shoes whit a blue jean and a shirt that were white and a grey jacket but this jacket were breaked. This fashion shows I don't liked I think is a lost of time because a will never buy some designs of this boys.

section2,task1

A few days ago I went to a festival and I didn't saw young people and this area have more young people than oldiest people and if they want to collect money they need to do a festival for adults and the youngest people. The festival only have classic music and not all the youngest people liked too much, this festival need modern music, the music that they listen and the music for the oldiest

ection1,task5

Dear Ben:
I know you want to be tv presenter and I will help you and this job is for you.
You are frinedly and funny, you speak clearly, you speak interesting thins and you like to do jokes and the people lugh when they are boried, but you some times forget some importants things and you need to practice your memorize and your hair is too long and you don't look good and you have to cut it.

section1,task4

My favourite singer:
I like a lot of tipes of music and I don't have a favourite singer because no one are like me and I don't think like the singers but the tipe of music I like more is the Pop music and the singer of the pop music that I like most is michael jackson because I like this tipe of music and the songs of this singer are good and I liked like the music of the classic rock and the musics of the beattles.

section1,task3

Dear Felipe:
Now I will participate in a sports competition and the rules are, first run 1 kilometer and then swimm 50 meters and if you are the first person that arrived to the finish you will meet a famous sports star and if I win I will meet michael jordan. Tomorrow I will swimm in the pool of the club naval de campo las salinas and to finish I will run in the beach and this I will do all the days.

Your friend, Ignacio.

sectio1,task2

Dear Pato:
You want to learn a new language and  I will give you my opinion of online course and the language at the schools. The online course I think that this is better than the language of the schools because the teachers are best the the techers of the schools and you will learn in your home and not in a school and I will prefer the online course because they teach better and you can do the course in your home.

section1, task 1

Dear Ben:

To organize this party I will buy the food and I will see the place of the party and I need your help for see other places to do the party because the place I saw is not so big and is not so beautiful and this spend a lot of time and now I will invite the people to the party. If rains there's no problems because the place have a roof and all the activities will inside.

Leisure Center

Few months ago in our city was installed a leisure center, the citizens were happy. But this is not so good because an inspector saw this leisure center but there are many risk of injury for adults and for the childrens.

If we do an inspection is easy to find problems in the buildings for example some parts of the floor are slippery, the walls are weak, the stairs are irregular and others problems. This is a risk for the society but we can do something to prevent this. A good idea is to send a letter to the mayor saying the problems of the leisure center and we can talk with a architect and they can give us the solutions.

background answers

1) the childrens in american schools have a problem with the food because they eat junk food like sweet/salty/high snacks
2)the worst group of students are the high because in the schools sell unhealthy snacks and drinks.
3)I think that  are a very good idea because the students will be less fat and they will have a better life eating healthy food.
4) I will be agree with this policy because in my school some students eat junk food and it's not good and some students eat junk food and are fat, they are bad in sports because they eat junk food.

Final proposal

Statement of the problem

We will have to fight against the lazy part of students/teachers. To win against this, what do we have to do? We have to this activities, but this activities have to be interesting, so that the persons participate.

Goals of my proposal

Possible problems

Our goals are simple. We want to transform this theme into a important theme. We want that persons consider this important. Also, we want to protect people from injuries.

So, we have to prepare against possible problems. We have to make this an entertaining theme so that people get involved in this. If we solve this problem, I think we will be ready to start

Outcomes

With is, I think that we will solve most important problems of schools probably. If we succefully hip get our goals, we will really help the schools

400 Words Article

Hi know I will talk about the injury prevention in the schools. In the elementary schools the youngest childs have more risk to get injuried and the teachers are very important. We can prevent the risks and the injuries but we can not eliminated only we can eliminate the 20 percent of the risks. the childrens in the age of 6 to 12 years old have more opportunities to get injuried.

A very interesting statistic says that "Every day, at least 15 kids get injured in school´s that have more than 500 student´s, and more than the 75% are because they go walking relaxed through a place, and they don´t care about their safety, and they go distracted.
A statistic say that in "U.S.A more tan 53 million of childrens get injuried in the schools". But we can do something like :
Include Injury prevention education in lessons of various subjects.
Set up a display about an Injury issue during parent-teacher interviews
Consult with the school´s parent council about safety issues in and around the school
Advocate safe Walk-to-school programs
Teach about injury prevention in parent-children conversation´s.

The childrens get injuried when they play dangerous games, they don't look when are in the stairs, in sports, run in the stairs and wet floors. Some childrens don't look the signs of security and play in parts that they don't have to play like in tall places or run in wet floors.

We have to teach the childrens to prevent injuries and the teachers and parents need to know how prevent injuries and to teach the childrens because is better to the childrens and I have a question if we don't teach the childrens who? this is our responsability and now we promote the injury prevention in the schools to a better future to the childrens.



 

My 200 Words Article

We know that the injuries can not  be eliminated but we can prevent. The childrens of age 6 to 12 years have more risk to get injuried. most of the childrens don't recognize the danger but when they became older they became more independent and do other things but the other things have different risk and different injurie. The injuries are a part of the childhood we can not eliminated but we can teach to the childrens how to prevent injuries in sports, games of the school and teach how to prevent risk in intenet in facebook, twiter and other sites of internet. Another thing is that the teachers can theach in the school to prevent injuries and risks. In the oarents meetings the teachers can teach to the parents how prevent the injuries and the risks and the parents in home can theach the childrens to prevent.

Here is the link if you want to see more:
http://www.albertahealthservices.ca/4855.asp

Video of injury prevention

Click Here to go watch the video

Poster Assesment

Here we have the 2 poster that I evaluated with felipe campusano. The one at right was very good, it had important information and draws. The one at the left, was "Not bad" because it had very poor information and the draws were half made

My Survey

We made a survey about the inury prevention at schools so that we know if people are interested in this theme or if they would like to improve the injury prevention programs.
We made also, a question to know how many times people get injured, so that we know if the persons get injured often, and with this we can know how improtant is this theme

Click Here to answer the survey

Captions

Do Not Run 1: Ignacio is walking safely throght the stairs. Beside him is an chart were it says "do not run".
Do Not Run 2: Ignacio doesn't pays atention to the chart and hi is falling by the stairs, because he was running through stairs.
Do Not Run 3: Ignacio falls by the stairs and now he is injured in the ground, because he ran through the stairs.
Electric board: Ignacio is trying to open the electric board and he gots electrocuted
Panel: Say to the teachers of your school to put this. Safety advices so that you prevent this injuries.
Touching Electric panel: Dont touch where you dont have to. You could even die!.
Do Not Smoke sign: You have to pay atention to all the signs so that you prevent injuries.
Sings, Sings everywhere: Pay very much atention when you are in changing rooms or near them, because usualy there is wet.
More Sings: Dont say that here in the school we dont have safety signs, because the school is full of them.
Pending from changing rooms: Be very careful when you are in tall places. Not all the time will be a person to help you!.
Stairs do not run: Always you have to go slow through stairs, and you cant run, as this advice says.
Climbing a tree: Dont make things like this because you can get injured.
Falling from the tree: This will happen to you if you make rushy things, so, dont do this things!.
Ignacio falling down: Dont run through small parts and see the floor so that you end like this.
Ignacio in nursery: Try not to be like Ignacio and prevent your injuries so that you dont end like this.

pictures

Do Not Run 1: Ignacio is walking safely throght the stairs. Beside him is an chart were it says "do not run".

Do Not Run 2: Ignacio doesn't pays atention to the chart and hi is falling by the stairs, because he was running through stairs

Do Not Run 3: Ignacio falls by the stairs and now he is injured in the ground, because he ran through the stairs.

Electric board: Ignacio is trying to open the electric board and he gots electrocuted.

Panel: Say to the teachers of your school to put this. Safety advices so that you prevent this injuries.

Touching Electric panel: Dont touch where you dont have to. You could even die!.

Do Not Smoke sign: You have to pay atention to all the signs so that you prevent injuries.

Sings, Sings everywhere: Pay very much atention when you are in changing rooms or near them, because usualy there is wet.

More Sings: Dont say that here in the school we dont have safety signs, because the school is full of them.

Pending from changing rooms: Be very careful when you are in tall places. Not all the time will be a person to help you!.

Stairs do not run: Always you have to go slow through stairs, and you cant run, as this advice says.

Climbing a tree: Dont make things like this because you can get injured.

Falling from the tree: This will happen to you if you make rushy things, so, dont do this things!.

Ignacio falling down: Dont run through small parts and see the floor so that you end like this.

Ignacio in nursery: Try not to be like Ignacio and prevent your injuries so that you dont end like this.

Questions of the Coursebook

a)Julian, George and Mrs. Philpot.
b)Is a summer day.
c)I think that was Mrs. Philpot because he said you musn't spoil us.
d) A old man with a shock of snowy white hair and a luxuriant white beard.
e)Too much work!
f)

words definition

A) Hectic = characterized by extreme activity or excitement.
B) schedule = a plan of procedure for a project, allotting the work to be done and the time for it.
C) hanging = the act of a person or thing that hangs.
D) dig = to form or excavate (a hole, tunnel, passage, etc) by digging, usually with an implement or (of animals) with feet, claws, etc.
E) kneeling = to rest, fall, or support oneself on one’s knees.
F) hauling up = to drag or draw (something) with effort.
G) pottery shards =articles, vessels, etc, made from earthenware and dried and baked in a kiln.
H) beads = a small usually spherical piece of glass, wood, plastic, etc, with a hole through it by means of which it may be strung with others to form a necklace, etc.
I) lodging = a temporary residence.
J) wares = articles of manufacture considered as being for sale.
k) allay = to relieve (pain, grief, etc) or be relieved.
L) impoverished =to make poor or diminish the quality of: to impoverish society by cutting the grant to the arts.
M) pounding = to walk (the pavement, street, etc) repeatedly: he pounded the pavement looking for a job.
N) outfitter = a shop that sells men’s clothes